Post by The Beta Reader Admin on Dec 11, 2015 18:09:05 GMT
Something that I keep running into with first-third person hybrids is that a lot of the characters are two-dimensional. The narrator seems to forget that the reader needs to form an emotional bond with the characters, especially the protagonist.
I wish that more authors would remember to convey emotion and body language. Am I right?
I wish that more authors would remember to convey emotion and body language. Am I right?